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The Taker
By Stormcomin
Inside the lonely room I'm dark
Outside, I'm naked
Unclothed and exposed
To the seer, I am blame
To the fear, I am shame
Within the crying mind I'm gloom
Beside, I'm shaded
Unseen and concealed
To the player, I am whole
To the prayer, I am soul
Let the blood not dry within my hours
For the taker must continue
Let it be the blame or shame un-fouled
Of the parting that's within you
Don't look up with eyes alight with powers
Nor down with the hate that's in you
Let me see the whole of soul unboweled
For the taker must continue
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Copyright 2004 Stormcomin
Published on Tuesday, November 9, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Taker"
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On Friday, December 3, 2004, island warrior
(210)
wrote:
i love the way this ends
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
kick ass storm thats all i can say to this, i think i'm gonna add you to faves
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On Thursday, November 18, 2004, MyBrokenMynd
(167) wrote:
yes.... way kick ass.. your goin to my favs too..
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Stormcomin
(32) wrote:
lol. thanks.
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A former member wrote:
....I can't help but continually visualize the pro wrestler "The Undertaker".
Which is cool. He's good.
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