So Young So Soon

By nobody-in_the_darkness

Day after day
Life drones on
Every one a sketch of the past
Feelings gone
And dispair replaced
Sick of changing because of it
Angry and hopeless
A child corrupted so young
Ready to give up so soon
Darkened stone heart
A rose
Destroyed by it

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Copyright 2004 nobody-in_the_darkness
Published on Tuesday, November 2, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I can really connect with this poem. I understand the pain felt and the anger within it. Or perhaps that's my own feelings from my memories. If so, it just makes it an all the more powerful poem! Love it! Please keep up the poetry.

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