"Freaky"

By Forever Cold

Something’s creeping over me.
I won’t let it go to seed.
My nerves are shot.
And maybe I am crazy.
But every time I see that face.
The hate grows stronger.
And I just can’t seem to breathe.
Her final breath.
She’s about to take.
Can you feel it?
Laughs
I can. I can see her.
She’s never off your skin.
But I will fix that.


She’s running hard now.
I despise.
But no.
She’s not getting that.
Her last breath.
Painful as it is.
But broken windpipe dose no
Revive.

Head in my hands.
Walking with out place.
I’m awake.. I know I am.
And the blood calls to me.
She’s mine.
And her life is fast to end.


What is happening, my mind isn’t mine.
This is something else.
I am drowning.
Help. Dear god help.

There is no god here.
There is only pain.
And the blood that can save me…
She's mine, and she will know my fury.
In her flesh she will repay her sins.
As she burns her screams are my music.
Dose it hurt?
Fucking whore!
You get what you deserve.

She’s gone.
And I can feel my legs.
That feeling I had.
Is silent as the dead.
What have I done?
Where is my salvation?
In blood I had her.
She was never mine.

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Copyright 2004 Forever Cold
Published on Friday, October 15, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • DarkWolf On Friday, October 15, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    Dark and yes, freaky. I liked it.. very cool. -Michael

  • A former member wrote: The last part is amazing.. And the beginning reminded me of Korn lyrics.. That's cool. Wow good write. ~Wish Upon A Star

  • A former member wrote: wow. that is very well written! It is dark and sinister. I love how well you explain what he is thinking!

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