My Thoughts - The Truth Revealed Pt II (Realization)
By Syn
Weakness is contagious
when we feed off ourselves
You gnaw and you gnaw until
you can satisfy the almost
insatiable hunger
that drives your mind
drives you mad
drives you to the end
Expecting and needing
pushing so hard
surfacing for air
that no longer fills your lungs
and you fight
so hard so long
until your knuckles are white
face is blue
And you collapse
you knew you were never going to win
you set yourself up for failure
And you cry
you cry out needing something
needing someone
until you find theres no one there
and you realize youre weak
and you know youve always been
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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Wednesday, September 8, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Monday, February 12, 2007, lajeeves
(48) wrote:
smile..please, someone somewhere loves you for who you are! if not mabey im a fool. i feel yo pain
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On Saturday, April 15, 2006, Mahakala
(209) wrote:
sad but true... wonderful write... hit way to close to home....
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, so_skeevy
(64) wrote:
very unique. It makes you question
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A former member wrote:
ouch. this one really hits hard on the emotion level. good write.
-namelez
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, Deadly Embrace
(41) wrote:
Whoa. This is my exact feeling at this moment.. Down to the very last detail. Amazing write indeed. -de
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
This is painful to read.. in the 'truth hurts' sorta way... -Michael
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
Truth Hurts Indeed :(