the haiku

By mysticventures






Witness the haiku


Essence, time, transfixed as one


Words have magic too!

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Friday, September 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I like the "mise en abyme", a story inside a story or in this case, a haiku about haiku. And, maybe I'm reading too much into this, but the "too" in "words have magic too" made me wonder: "too", as opposed to what? All I wanted to say was, any work that makes me think is good, so nice job, and thank you for sharing (: (I know this is old, was browsing haiku and stumbled upon this)

  • A former member wrote: Without words you are nothing. ~Shane~

  • DarkWolf On Saturday, September 4, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    Haikus, usually to me, are just short, but pointless. This one was excellent. Very well done. -Michael

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