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the haiku
By mysticventures
Witness the haiku
Essence, time, transfixed as one
Words have magic too!
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Friday, September 3, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
I like the "mise en abyme", a story inside a story or in this case, a haiku about haiku. And, maybe I'm reading too much into this, but the "too" in "words have magic too" made me wonder: "too", as opposed to what? All I wanted to say was, any work that makes me think is good, so nice job, and thank you for sharing (: (I know this is old, was browsing haiku and stumbled upon this)
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A former member wrote:
Without words
you are
nothing.
~Shane~
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On Saturday, September 4, 2004, DarkWolf
(415)
wrote:
Haikus, usually to me, are just short, but pointless. This one was excellent. Very well done. -Michael
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