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Feel Me???
By knightmirror
formidablessonscurrying
across desolate floors of rubbled
emotionsmea(Red)efining
narcoleptic paralysis within crevices
mergingiganticatastrophies
amongst familiar enviroments frowns
shrubeckonsensationestling
right
this
w
a
y
unsturdy spiraling staircase creaks and speaks
"look down and notice where you're falling,
where you're going to land and surely yell
for help that won't come to your side to aid
the ungodly wounds branded on your heart"
can you hear me listening to myself?
can you feel me beating at myself?
can you see me staring at myself?
can you?
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Copyright 2004 knightmirror
Published on Thursday, September 2, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Feel Me???"
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On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Sin
(1168)
wrote:
you are incredible..i miss your words..and these posts of yours are my only comfort..as always this was amazing ~kristy
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On Monday, September 6, 2004, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
this echos with such a screaming, like falling down a chasm. The sights conjured and the feeling raging, so forceful. Yes, I can definitely feel you, without a doubt... Great work.
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On Thursday, September 2, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
double thumbs up on this on Knighty... fanfuckingtastic. The flow, the words, the imagery... a great piece from go to whoah. P.S: You're a right spunk. :)
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On Thursday, September 2, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Wowness...The word play is entrancing, something i've never been good at..."emotionsmea(Red)efining" was great :)
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