one wish

By mysticventures


To see

beyond the self-imposed

walls off illusion



To dwell

in the creative principle

that I am



To finally

witness life and creation

as one

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Monday, August 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Virgils Vigil On Wednesday, May 11, 2011, Virgils Vigil (75)By person wrote:

    Quick yet thought provoking. Good write. Scholar

  • sixsixnine On Tuesday, April 14, 2009, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    pure wisdom and perhaps a wish yet to come true, but will... This feels very true, somewhere deep deep inside.

  • lajeeves On Monday, February 12, 2007, lajeeves (48)By person wrote:

    huh...?

  • capt_funguy On Wednesday, August 25, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    ahhhh ... nice slice of zen pie ... actually slowed my heartbeat a bit when i read it .... i think you're on to something ... too cool man ... funguy

  • A former member wrote: A truly worth while goal.

  • A former member wrote: Cool, parts of this write reminds me alot of myself and how I sometimes try to take an outside look at myself, like looking into a mirror sort of thing.

  • mysticventures On Monday, August 23, 2004, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    as a matter of fact ONEANDLONELY - yes , yes I have - many times in fact!

  • ONEANDLONELY On Monday, August 23, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (117)By person wrote:

    Have you read "Science Of Mind" by Ernest Holmes?

  • Northstar On Monday, August 23, 2004, Northstar (375)By person wrote:

    I can really groove with the closing lines of this piece

  • A former member wrote: And we would all be the better for it. Good write, lovely idea. ~Wish Upon A Star

  • Munkey On Monday, August 23, 2004, Munkey (79)By person wrote:

    You've a real Japenish/Chineseish flow to your words I like it. Keep it dark and flowin man -Munkey-

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