one wish
By mysticventures
To see
beyond the self-imposed
walls off illusion
To dwell
in the creative principle
that I am
To finally
witness life and creation
as one
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Monday, August 23, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, May 11, 2011, Virgils Vigil
(74) wrote:
Quick yet thought provoking. Good write.
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On Tuesday, April 14, 2009, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
pure wisdom and perhaps a wish yet to come true, but will... This feels very true, somewhere deep deep inside.
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On Monday, February 12, 2007, lajeeves
(46) wrote:
huh...?
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On Wednesday, August 25, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
ahhhh ... nice slice of zen pie ... actually slowed my heartbeat a bit when i read it .... i think you're on to something ... too cool man ... funguy
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A former member wrote:
A truly worth while goal.
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A former member wrote:
Cool, parts of this write reminds me alot of myself and how I sometimes try to take an outside look at myself, like looking into a mirror sort of thing.
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On Monday, August 23, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
as a matter of fact ONEANDLONELY - yes , yes I have - many times in fact!
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On Monday, August 23, 2004, ONEANDLONELY
(114) wrote:
Have you read "Science Of Mind" by Ernest Holmes?
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On Monday, August 23, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
I can really groove with the closing lines of this piece
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A former member wrote:
And we would all be the better for it. Good write, lovely idea. ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Monday, August 23, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
You've a real Japenish/Chineseish flow to your words I like it. Keep it dark and flowin man -Munkey-