Dissonance...
By Spiritus_Frumenti
The world is still,
Yet doves are flying to the highest mountains
Where they run out of air
Falling back down
And everyday I hear those doves cry from under the ground
Within the soil that holds them now
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The world is still,
Yet unicorns are riding unto the oceans,
Past forests and deserts,
Where they drown slowly with every passing wave
And everyday I see them gasping and fretting
From within the seas that holds them now
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The world is still,
Yet dolphins are approaching the bottom,
Where it is dark and flesh caves in,
Sinking and shattering,
Lifeless unto the depth
And everyday I feel my heart crushing
With the pain of those dolphins
How their bodies sank within, descending further
To the darkest floor that holds them now...
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Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2004
Comments on "Dissonance..."
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On Saturday, November 27, 2004, Litteratus
(42) wrote:
Beautiful. I was particularly moved due to the mournful ambient music that happened to play as I read, but the text itself would've been more than sufficient.
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On Tuesday, September 7, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
i see empathy........i see a symbiotic nature......i see an end of poetic beauty........well spoken........urban
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On Monday, August 23, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
The creation and the annihilation...Beauty and Horror...You always evoke so much in a small canvas...Always with eloquence...
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
this is amazing.. I love how you've created such truth into beautiful, fantasy world type images. Especially the first stanza, I love it. So true. Amazing work.
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
i absolutely love this,the feeling you portray,in the imagery is incredible,such animpressive concept and beautiuful portrayal of,a favourite
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
there is something haunting about this piece--it is both natural and supernatural
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A former member wrote:
I find a tranquil somberity in this poem...there is some kind of peace conveyed here...crumbling sooner with every word.