Vision of a Feast (or Feast for One) - repost

By mysticventures


Hungry little creature


Living on the nectar of desire


Licking sticky fingers


Golden honey, lustful loins of fire


Writhing plate of passion


Chocolate covered cherries filled with cream


Luscious dripping morsels


Gorging in an oh so succulent dream


Cornucopia of pleasure


Erupting in a mountain of delight


Feast for all the senses


What a way to spend a lonely night

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Saturday, August 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Tastes great. Less filling.

  • manywalks On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    ya know, this could just about take me there....*must get head out of gutter*.

  • sixsixnine On Sunday, August 15, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    i told what i thought of this the first time the feeling doesn't change.. its got sex written all over it... sweet sexy & deep.. the way i love it *669*

  • girlafraid On Sunday, August 15, 2004, girlafraid (479)By person wrote:

    mmm...this made my mouth water..

  • A former member wrote: yes it did make me hungry too.. :P good work

  • darkangelXlll On Saturday, August 14, 2004, darkangelXlll (107)By person wrote:

    shit that made me hungry ::takes tongue out at mystic:: ~darlin :)

  • Northstar On Saturday, August 14, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    very nicely done--imagery is awesome--so is the flow

  • NikesRain On Saturday, August 14, 2004, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    now that's what I call decadence....or an exquisite dessert menu ;) absolutely sweet and wickedly yummy

  • elisa On Saturday, August 14, 2004, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    Damn. my senses are twitching;) Great! elisa

  • Storm On Saturday, August 14, 2004, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    Must say I wish I wasn't addicted to sleep so I could spend my nights like this instead of being stalked by mares. Who need love when you've got food ey? I'd drink to that.

  • Anth On Saturday, August 14, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    such vivid imagery here, a wicked portrayal,brilliantly written as ever,its just flawless,painsatakingly,and a pleasure to read,

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