Vision of a Feast (or Feast for One) - repost
By mysticventures
Hungry little creature
Living on the nectar of desire
Licking sticky fingers
Golden honey, lustful loins of fire
Writhing plate of passion
Chocolate covered cherries filled with cream
Luscious dripping morsels
Gorging in an oh so succulent dream
Cornucopia of pleasure
Erupting in a mountain of delight
Feast for all the senses
What a way to spend a lonely night
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Saturday, August 14, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
Tastes great. Less filling.
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On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, manywalks
(747) wrote:
ya know, this could just about take me there....*must get head out of gutter*.
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On Sunday, August 15, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
i told what i thought of this the first time the feeling doesn't change.. its got sex written all over it... sweet sexy & deep.. the way i love it *669*
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On Sunday, August 15, 2004, girlafraid
(479) wrote:
mmm...this made my mouth water..
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A former member wrote:
yes it did make me hungry too.. :P good work
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On Saturday, August 14, 2004, darkangelXlll
(107) wrote:
shit that made me hungry ::takes tongue out at mystic:: ~darlin :)
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On Saturday, August 14, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
very nicely done--imagery is awesome--so is the flow
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On Saturday, August 14, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
now that's what I call decadence....or an exquisite dessert menu ;) absolutely sweet and wickedly yummy
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On Saturday, August 14, 2004, elisa
(1595) wrote:
Damn. my senses are twitching;) Great! elisa
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On Saturday, August 14, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
Must say I wish I wasn't addicted to sleep so I could spend my nights like this instead of being stalked by mares. Who need love when you've got food ey? I'd drink to that.
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On Saturday, August 14, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
such vivid imagery here, a wicked portrayal,brilliantly written as ever,its just flawless,painsatakingly,and a pleasure to read,