Heaven's Glow

By mysticventures




Its in the gleam of your smile

When I say I love you


Its in the sparkle of your eyes

When you say you love me more


Its the aura that I see

When we are wrapped in each others arms

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Saturday, August 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • LordBrosnian On Tuesday, August 29, 2006, LordBrosnian (44)By person wrote:

    With only six lines you've left me ravaged. Like a candle in the storm. I've been snuffed. Excellent write!

  • MyScarsStillBleed On Wednesday, April 6, 2005, MyScarsStillBleed (16)By person wrote:

    *Swoons* Wow, this is short, sweet, and amazing. Simply beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: This is a beautiful and simple piece of writing, loevely x

  • A former member wrote: Damn this is good. Short but good.

  • DarkWolf On Thursday, August 19, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    Deeply romantic.. very loving.. oh I so can relate to this piece.. Wonderful. -Michael

  • Lynaes On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    Absolutely beautiful, perfect in it's simplicity... and so true.

  • Northstar On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    *deep breath* this is completely breathtaking in its simplicity and intimacy--I love this--go you with your spontaneity

  • Zara Synn On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Zara Synn (57)By person wrote:

    I love what the last two lines make me see in my mind. Nothing short of lovely.

  • Anth On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    yeah :)

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