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Heaven's Glow
By mysticventures
Its in the gleam of your smile
When I say I love you
Its in the sparkle of your eyes
When you say you love me more
Its the aura that I see
When we are wrapped in each others arms
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Saturday, August 7, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, August 29, 2006, LordBrosnian
(44)
wrote:
With only six lines you've left me ravaged. Like a candle in the storm. I've been snuffed. Excellent write!
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On Wednesday, April 6, 2005, MyScarsStillBleed
(16) wrote:
*Swoons* Wow, this is short, sweet, and amazing. Simply beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
This is a beautiful and simple piece of writing, loevely x
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A former member wrote:
Damn this is good. Short but good.
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On Thursday, August 19, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Deeply romantic.. very loving.. oh I so can relate to this piece.. Wonderful. -Michael
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On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Absolutely beautiful, perfect in it's simplicity... and so true.
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On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
*deep breath* this is completely breathtaking in its simplicity and intimacy--I love this--go you with your spontaneity
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On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Zara Synn
(57) wrote:
I love what the last two lines make me see in my mind. Nothing short of lovely.
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On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
yeah :)
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