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Sea Monster
By Syn
If I was a sea monster I would drink the water dry
and leave nothing but rocky sea floor
And all the fish would flail about
soon finding their fate
And all would die because of me, cause I am a nasty Sea Monster.
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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Thursday, June 24, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, Syn
(76)
wrote:
Yeah, it was fun to write this...Too bad I get this bored, lol. -Syn
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A former member wrote:
I like the end bit it made me giggle
Very good
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
Not if I was a sea monster...hmmm, I don't think...Or would it?
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A former member wrote:
hehe, made me giggle...but surely all that salt water would make you sick?
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
this is cool,unique it made me smile i like the imagery of this
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
This was cool...a refreshing read...i liked the fish pt also...great job kya
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
Ohhhh, I am gonna write about that next...can I use your idea??? lol
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A former member wrote:
Hmm..then you'd have no water, either. But the fish flailing about was a nice image...I'd like to see SeaMonster in a nice swimming pool, sipping lemonade on a floatie...letting her slime float onto all of the pedestrians.
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