like the way you do

By Syn

Nothing seems to kill me
like the way you look at me
nothing seems to tear me down
like the words you say to me
nothing seems to shake me
like the way you touch me
and nothing seems to break me
like the way you fuck me

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Thursday, June 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Monday, June 27, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    perfection.......

  • NikesRain On Friday, June 18, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    Just really, really like this, perfectly put. Well done.

  • A former member wrote: nicely said. I-S .Azz

  • nell On Thursday, June 17, 2004, nell (271)By person wrote:

    nice little ditty, very heavy heavy heavy, i likes it

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