I wish...you

By Syn

You say I dont support you,
I wish I had the strength to try
You said I dont care,
I just wish I could cry
My world is in shambles
Im breaking at the seams
I wish that you were real
not another broken dream
I wish that I could feel
but I am only numb
I wish that I was someone else
rather than the person Ive become


a pathetic attempt to feel...when there is nothing left.

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Thursday, June 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: No attempt is un-noticed.. Atleast when you post it here it isn't! nice job --Kaosu

  • Lord Kalgalath On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    another well done....you captured the emotion very well

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