kitty in dreamland (down the rabbit hole)

By KittyStryker

all of this
is this all
there is

in us
in here

in
finity
being
trapped
caught

yes
i have
red
hands

in
secure

within
without

out
side
looking
in

where am i
where
is here
and there
is no way
to tell
which way
you went

my guide
keeps
distancing
dis
appearing
behind realities

unaware
yet
so
aware
of what this
may
mean








dreams
tell us everything
without ever
saying
anything

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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Sunday, May 30, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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Comments on "kitty in dreamland (down the rabbit hole)"

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  • Drea On Monday, November 29, 2004, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    *claps* Stunnging.

  • BleedSilver On Tuesday, July 20, 2004, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    I like how the words are fractured, and seem to speak out in there own way, and the dream theme holds it together nicely...~Mikey

  • murder_in_clubland On Sunday, May 30, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    i like the title it suits the poem very well and the end tied everything together wll done~ss

  • glasshouse On Sunday, May 30, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    Bravo. -Glass

  • Anth On Sunday, May 30, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    wonderfully written with some really inspired parts and flow and the last verse i so loved


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