kitty in dreamland (down the rabbit hole)
By KittyStryker
all of this
is this all
there is
in us
in here
in
finity
being
trapped
caught
yes
i have
red
hands
in
secure
within
without
out
side
looking
in
where am i
where
is here
and there
is no way
to tell
which way
you went
my guide
keeps
distancing
dis
appearing
behind realities
unaware
yet
so
aware
of what this
may
mean
dreams
tell us everything
without ever
saying
anything
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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Sunday, May 30, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, November 29, 2004, Drea
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*claps* Stunnging.
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On Tuesday, July 20, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
I like how the words are fractured, and seem to speak out in there own way, and the dream theme holds it together nicely...~Mikey
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On Sunday, May 30, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
i like the title it suits the poem very well and the end tied everything together wll done~ss
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On Sunday, May 30, 2004, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
Bravo. -Glass
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On Sunday, May 30, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
wonderfully written with some really inspired parts and flow and the last verse i so loved