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The Rose
By hopeless
My heart as though an unnoticed rose
floating upon leaves of emerald green passion
invisioned upon the dullest thorns to hide my beauty
Crimson lace graces the purity of love upon cheeks
so pure as is seen upon the palest tinted skin
within eyes of brown desire
An echo upon the mountains of green trees
containing everflowing emotions
wandering through the roots
only to feed what is not there
To watch within mine eyes
is to notice the things un cared for
as though this crystal heart
knows not of the words you speek
the simple expressionless stares
burning through the canopy of life
Trailing within a tatterd heart
is love so lost upon the chaos of
a life within
this once destroyed soul
waiting so solemnly for the chance
to express what i know that you dont
And through these waters my life does flow
from me as ive tried
so helplessly to profess my dulling pain behind
this mask of the purest beauty
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Copyright 2004 hopeless
Published on Thursday, May 27, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Rose"
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On Sunday, June 20, 2004, Solace
(1065)
wrote:
A vision of romanticism, that beauty tinged with sorrow deal that plays the heart strings like a violin...A rose by any other name...
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On Friday, June 18, 2004, Lost_Soul
(34) wrote:
WOW, this just completely blew me out of my seat. The imagery, the descriptions, the sorrow, everything about it I just really enjoyed. Your a very gifted and talented writer.
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On Friday, May 28, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
everysingle verse so richly beautiful entwined in imagery and feeling, makes this one of my most favourites from you, truly you excelled here , awesome!!
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On Friday, May 28, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
Oh hopeless, I've told you what I think of this.. This by far my most favourite of yours, the descriptions are breath-taking. I love the second stanza. I love it all.
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