Featureless Landscapes : Prologue

By GreekPhilosopher

Lies
Speaking a silent lipâ€™s quiver
Iterates simple defiance
To make hearts shiver

Injustice
For all internally to see
Enforcing foul thought
To taint sweet memory

Arrogance
Starting to take strong hold
Guide awkward feet
As assurances are told

Disharmony
Singing a discordant yawn
Slipping silently away
Leading to arctic dawn

Featureless
Beginnings to something old
Tearing down walls
Protecting landscapes so cold

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Published on Tuesday, May 18, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Featureless Landscapes : Prologue"

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A former member wrote: wow, i really liked this!
On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, urbanhumility (1175) wrote:

eloquent and beautifuly articulate........always a pleasure to read your work sleek................urban
On Saturday, May 29, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (1703) wrote:

Very nice! I like the sections about Disharmony and Featureless the best - "protecting landscapes so cold", is a great way to end this piece. Ciao, T/S
On Sunday, May 23, 2004, aXe FactoR (335) wrote:

vivid explanations at each point. flow was smooth and perfect. a nicely written piece. :)
On Saturday, May 22, 2004, girlafraid (480) wrote:

oh...i wonder why i have never read you before...I like this very much, especially "Enforcing foul thought To taint sweet memory". I must read more...
On Saturday, May 22, 2004, sixsixnine (477) wrote:

i couldn't help but sing it while i read this very mooving * you're very talented man! *669*
On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, Delphoid-Q (213) wrote:

Yes, my friendâ€¦ This is what I like to see. Clear, eloquent and purposeful. I want the rest.
On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246) wrote:

we missed you man.. *bows in the deep dust of dp* I love it my friend, as allways..
On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, BleedSilver (298) wrote:

I love the format and rhyming this poem has...each stanza builds up to something more...If this a prologue, then I can't wait to see the rest.~Mikey
On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, Anth (1133) wrote:

superb poem, every stanza, the last being my fave.cleverly rhymed ill certainly be looking forward to each new work from you