Vulturous Purple (stream of Consciousness writing)
By Emma Tenebrae
Stream of consciousness is fun in there is no punctuation the words just
flow and flow.
Emma
Vulturous Purple
I went to the park and took a bench to quench my pens lust for a page of
woe to my heart and my mind found a fresh start on the whirls of ink on
paper of love lyrics I wrote for darkness fell over the light of my eyes
did not see the vulture preying to get closer to my shoulders drooped the
despair they did not wrought on any passersby thru my clichés from movies
where butterflies cry out as I did at the gnarly black bird settled in
for a moment of silence clicks into my mind as he flew past the soft into
the hard black core the apple of life with strychnine seeds of death it
gave to me and my thoughts turned black with lack of love sought on dreams
of pending gloom it with me a vulturous void of impenetrable cold come
hither it spoke already cross that on it was as close as I got to this
languid pool of mist deep in the caverns of death rode up to me and took
my hand we discussed what of life I would bring to the table of friends
and neighbors weary of etiquette desire colored purple surrounded my pet
and I got closer and smiled.
Comments on "Vulturous Purple (stream of Consciousness writing)"
-
On Thursday, May 27, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
very cool and original style. one of a kind. nice. :)
-
On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
Welcome to DP... I love conscious stream.. thoughts just pour and your pen can hardly keep up with your ever racing mind... Great stuff.. :) :::OLd
-
On Friday, March 12, 2004, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
There's something very unique and quite satisfying in the style this has been written in. Thoroughly enjoyable. The content was great as well. Nice job. And welcome to DP.