My Masterpiece

By GreekPhilosopher

My masterpiece
So beautiful
My magnum opus
So grand
My tour de force
So powerful
My dreams
So vivid

Where are you now
When I need you most

My hope
So
Undefined

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Copyright 2004 GreekPhilosopher
Published on Sunday, February 1, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Blinded_Tiger On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    Words that hold big meaning are often best in short numbers and with fine tuning, you do it well. ohh and the undefined.... I am doing good with undefined, these days.

  • Blinded_Tiger On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    .First everything was undefined then things got defined and I had to make sure they where undefined while they where defined, then I went to far and made things defined that was not and notwim glad when things actualy are undefined.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Monday, July 12, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    I got what I wanted never the less .. fuck expectations..

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, May 27, 2004, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    a question and answer so well defined, beautiful.................urban

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, May 27, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Beautiful! "My hope so undefined" is the prefect ending to this one, it fits very well! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, February 3, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    I feel you my friend...

  • A former member wrote: so undefined. nice._-=Evil=-_

  • GreekPhilosopher On Sunday, February 1, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    Not What You Were Expecting, I Know. But It Is What It Is. GPhD.

  • Delphoid-Q On Tuesday, February 3, 2004, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    Not what I was expecting, but welcome all the same… It’s good to break out of your style and try something new. Well done.

  • A former member wrote: it is refreshing to read you again GPhD.

  • OLd SouL On Sunday, February 1, 2004, OLd SouL (734)By person wrote:

    and it is what it should be... I like the way you wrapped this up. :::OLd

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