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The Darkness Closes In
By Angelic Darkness
My world disappears into the darkness,
Into the depths of souls unseen,
Into the world of the unknown.
I lay trembling in that darkness,
Begging to be released from my confinement,
But my cries go unnoticed ...
Unwanted I lay there dying...
My blood puddling around my near lifeless body...
Pale flesh, dull eyes...
Shineless hair...
And pure red blood soaking into it all...
Will I die here alone?
Or will my unknown knight save me?
Thoughts fly through my head,
And I realize that no one cares...
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Published on Wednesday, July 3, 2002.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, December 5, 2004, rondant
(58)
wrote:
this is tragic....nice vivid pic I got from this......Ronda
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A former member wrote:
A hard realization. Yet, sometimes it just isn't true. No matter how people act or what they say somewhere deep inside them they DO care. Though you may never know trust that it is there. That is all you can do. Great write. C-ya. ~ Asheai
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A former member wrote:
Speechless, just speechless, it seems you get better every time you post
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A former member wrote:
I'm speechless . . . I think this is very very well written . . . I can relate to every word of it . . . im sorry you go through this though
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On Saturday, February 22, 2003, Angelic Darkness
(27) wrote:
For me it's life. Always the same thing anymore. Some claim to want to save me ffrom it, yet they push me under in the flood. I've given up. ~*~Angi~*~
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A former member wrote:
i understand totally about people's HOLLOW PROMISES . . . ~*~Ashley~*~
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