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Mental Break-Down
By Bloody_Hands
No emotion
Filtering through
Mask of life
Hiding away
Confrontation
Cornered by anger
Demanding
Another way
Feelings blocked
A dam of tears
One wrong word
All breaks apart
No more secrets
Everything out
Open to all
Unable to help
Phone call
Pick up
Hello? Yes?
Depression?
Help needed
Take the pill
Make all better
Just for now
Talk, talk
Past abuse
Problems surface
Need more help
Return again
More revealed
Masks shatter
Pain shows
Relax, Relax
Tell the story
Begin again
All the same
No solution
Clear at all
More pills
Take them all
Too many things
All too fast
So much confusion
Leave me alone
My mind breaks
Your pressure blinds
Everything closed
Hide from all
Go away, Go away
Leave and run
Too much to take
Too much to feel
Mental break-down
Eyes stare blank
Hidden away
From everything
No more thought
Or any fear
No more anger
It ends right here
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Copyright 2003 Bloody_Hands
Published on Saturday, November 15, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, October 7, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
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wrote:
yes the short lines, show simplicity .. and complexity, lovely..
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On Sunday, November 16, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
oo mental breakdowns, those are never good.. i like the poem though and how it's written with little short lines.. good job
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