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FAR(first night of your life)
By SGT Bloth
Too far away...
I kissed you yesterday, like frozen lips on a razor blade
I tasted you,
your Blood gave me lust
your eyes gave me love
your spirit gave me life
I took you in
you are mine now
eternity is too far for those who never die
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Copyright 2003 Bloth Andii
Published on Tuesday, October 28, 2003.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "FAR(first night of your life)"
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On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Drea
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wrote:
i truely love your work. it provokes such images that are so beautiful yet sorrowful ~Drea~
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On Thursday, October 30, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
frozen lips on a razorblade... awesome imagery in so few lines. Keep it up XXkRYzXX
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On Sunday, November 2, 2003, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
Thanks Doll.....Bloth
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On Wednesday, October 29, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I like this too. Your endings are so great!
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On Thursday, October 30, 2003, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
Thank you again my dear....i like to leave my readers with a lasting impression...You know something that makes you think....i hope this did it
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On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
Why thank you Seraph...It just kind of fit in there, This poem reminded me of that one love that never dies, that is almost utterly unattainable. I have found it once. I'm still trying to get there. It's where I belong.
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On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
I like that last line :) good poem *~seraph~*
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