That's how you die

By Oddtorrez

That's what's going to kill you in the end; the emptiness inside
No point in running and not an option to hide
Scars on your outer shell
are whispers of an inner hell
It consumes you it eats you and tears you apart
Can you feel the tole it takes on your heart?

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Copyright 2022 Oddtorrez
Published on Friday, September 23, 2022.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • in2th3Abyss On Friday, June 16, 2023, in2th3Abyss (35)By person wrote:

    I’m glad I’m not alone. Beautifully written

  • Oddtorrez On Friday, December 22, 2023, Oddtorrez (55)By person wrote:

    You're not

  • Jerry stiles On Saturday, October 15, 2022, Jerry stiles (251)By person wrote:

    I felt that..great work..

  • Oddtorrez On Monday, December 26, 2022, Oddtorrez (55)By person wrote:

    Thank you

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