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What is it?
By Silver Spectre
What is severance to the ocean
When its body is complete
What is indifference to the wind
When it knows nothing of deceit
What is in you that hurts me so
Yet keeps me on the edge of my seat
What is it in me that follows
The paths where fools believe
What is my breath to the mountain
What is it from you in me
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Copyright 2003 Michael Wayne Tabor
Published on Sunday, October 12, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "What is it?"
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On Monday, October 13, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434)
wrote:
such emotion here, this is what breeds awesome poetry...loved it..
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
i have read this 7 times. i dont think anything i say will express to you what this made me feel. "What is in you that hurts me so Yet keeps me on the edge of my seat"
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
i think i may have to do what six said and come back later. WOW..really..just..WOW~Drea~
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
I've been looking at this little what box wondering just what I can say that will let you know how much I like this. I can't think of any, so I may have to comment later.
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