Absolute Zero

By Doom Mantra

My world has frozen over. I try to imagine catching you on my tongue, but these snowflakes, they burn. And I cannot speak, I cannot eat. I leave my windows cracked open, but the sun refuses to shine through.

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Copyright 2020 Doom Mantra
Published on Tuesday, March 10, 2020.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

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Dec. 2019
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, March 11, 2020, TropicalSnowstorm (1772)By person wrote:

    I like the imagery in this one very much. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Phalanx On Tuesday, March 10, 2020, Phalanx (655)By person wrote:

    This is actually pretty damn good. It's incredibly relatable and I feel like you said all you could in the moment. That's more than just a good poem, that's honesty. Very well done.

  • Doom Mantra On Wednesday, March 11, 2020, Doom Mantra (38)By person wrote:

    I'm flattered that you think so highly of this piece. It is just "meh" to me, but I'm glad it could reach somebody in this way. Thank you!

  • 13sonsofgod On Tuesday, March 10, 2020, 13sonsofgod (857)By person wrote:

    Some things are better seen and remembered in their beauty, than tasted in the heart without them.. well written....13.......

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