Living Room Honeymoon

By Doom Mantra

From blood dust into blackblue
My throat rattle heartbeat against
your swollen cardiac bruise
Exchanging romantic jagged bone smiles
Cherishing the crippled image of you

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Copyright 2020 Doom Mantra
Published on Sunday, February 16, 2020.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Sept. 2019.
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  • River Lily On Monday, February 17, 2020, River Lily (1159)By person wrote:

    I also like the abstract use of words. Scholar

  • Star On Monday, February 17, 2020, Star (1186)By person wrote:

    “cherishing then crippled image of you” that hurt.

  • River Lily On Monday, February 17, 2020, River Lily (1159)By person wrote:

    I loved the dark imagery you presented. And I agree with 13, it does feel familiar. So much so Id like to keep this one. Scholar

  • Doom Mantra On Monday, February 17, 2020, Doom Mantra (38)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much! It is an honor.

  • 13sonsofgod On Sunday, February 16, 2020, 13sonsofgod (857)By person wrote:

    This feels familiar.......enjoyed....13......

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