October's Chill

By Sudos

Like it has to be...
Does it have to be over?
I know you're cold,
Please can you hold me?
The feeling's loose,
The chill of October's,
Fast approach.
You feel it too.
When I need you most,
Tell me, where are you?
I know you're close...
But exactly to whom?

Whisper sweet forevers and everything's okay.
Catch another tear just as it's falling.
No matter what, I'll be there.

Like it has to be...
But is it over?
I know you're cold,
Still I'm there holding,
These feelings, blue as,
The chill of October's,
Fast approach.
You feel it too.
When I need you most,
Tell me we are through.
I know you're close,
But I'll be gone soon...

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Copyright 2019 Sudos
Published on Monday, September 2, 2019.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sadistic intent hex On Tuesday, September 24, 2019, sadistic intent hex (245)By person wrote:

    nicely written very fluid rhyming the message of wondering where someone you love stands when you need them most can be such a head trip.

  • Hope in despair On Tuesday, September 3, 2019, Hope in despair (123)By person wrote:

    Love the raw emotion and longing and honesty of this piece! Beauty and pain dancing hand in hand!

  • Sudos On Tuesday, September 3, 2019, Sudos (185)By person wrote:

    Thank you.


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