an unapologetic fuck you

By Magdalena

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it used to be, the heart effected my bones   
and I would listen so intently to the magic spoken   
all of the alibis abducted from black and white movies   
how i soaked up the fiction of your fiasco   
  

blinded to fractures through the web of you   
i was offered hallucination and i accepted in my naivety   
a fortune told from granite hands and stone lips   
i stood at your edge, lost my balance   
  

you burnt me with an arsonists mind     
and i begged you to stop your thawing of me   
such out of control persistence, distorted luminosity   
the collisions were excused with your velvet persuasion   
  

there is nothing left but gossip of a suspicious unfortunate   
a triangle whispering about my goodbye careless   
i choose my cliffs carefully these days   
and avoid faked enthusiasm or the sweet aroma of a lie  

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Copyright 2019 Magdalena
Published on Monday, February 4, 2019.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • edenscancer On Monday, February 4, 2019, edenscancer (33)By person wrote:

    This is beyond phenomenal, and it pains me that it isn't being read outside the site... Absolutely crushing weaving of analogy that feels as if it's being spoken from the soul.

  • Magdalena On Wednesday, February 6, 2019, Magdalena (616)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much. I wrote it over a year ago and is posted elsewhere and I also created an audio video of this piece and it is on my YouTube channel. :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kRU-L_WJ_KM

  • I IS ME On Monday, February 4, 2019, I IS ME (406)By person wrote:

    Shit happens and you can't tell when love will strike you, nice

  • Magdalena On Monday, February 4, 2019, Magdalena (616)By person wrote:

    I know you from somewhere. My heart is a bundle of apathy. Thanks.

  • I IS ME On Monday, February 4, 2019, I IS ME (406)By person wrote:

    yes you do, enough said, nice piece


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