On the Edge of Forever
By Midnight Phoenix
This is just as perilous every day since I heard about you, about you
It is getting hard just to stay awake when I dream about you, dream about
you
When will this moment be washed in sand
We can’t deny it’s a fantasy
It won’t be long before this moment’s end
It’s a severed tune, tune
When we’re thrown away we’ll fall together in the night
And watch these days go passing by
Where will we go when we fall together in the night
And watch these days go passing by
Watch as the silver drops land in vain into my solitude, for you
I’ll ask my heart for another change but I’ll be waiting for you, waiting
for you
When will this moment be washed in sand
We can’t deny it’s a fantasy
It won’t be long before this moment’s end
It’s a severed tune, tune
When we’re thrown away we’ll fall together in the night
And watch these days go passing by
Where will we go when we fall together in the night
And watch these days go passing by
Comments on "On the Edge of Forever"
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On Friday, October 24, 2003, diavolessa
(208) wrote:
solitude... one word that can kill ones soul... {dia}
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A former member wrote:
I really liked the word repetition in this and the overall feel of this poem. The feeling of begging your heart to let you move on but knowing that inevitably it won't let you. Awsome job. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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On Friday, October 3, 2003, manywalks
(750) wrote:
...we'll fall together in the night...mmmm. ~ mw
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On Thursday, October 2, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
This is a great song.....I just wish I could hear the music ...though I almost do.....a melancholic , timeless sound.
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On Thursday, October 2, 2003, Loserland
(113) wrote:
sad dpressing, maybe i'm just in that mood anyway. but that's how it makes me feel....good piece