All Alone
By midnights voice
It's almost two a.m.
in the morning
I hear the silence
of the forgotten
and forlorn
I see the endless
empty feelings
of being here
forgotten and
all alone
The evening
was so full of
promise
The laughter was
so natural
and carefree
I felt like I
had finally found
the place that
I was meant to be
But the people
soon paired into
couples
The loud noise
had become
subdued
And by midnight
the room was mostly
empty
Empty as the feeling
it had left inside of
me
So I left
and nobody
noticed
No goodbyes
or see you again
real soon
I walked into the
darknees
of the warm
evening air
Realizing that I was
one of those people
who had no one
who cared
So put me on
the highway
I've got no where
I have to be
More empty miles
of lonesome
on the road
called eternity
And I will now fake it
And I will somehow
learn to take it
Take it all back home
with me
So put me on
the highway
I've got no where
I have to be
More empty miles
of lonesome
on the road
to eternity
Comments on "All Alone"
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On Friday, May 18, 2018, I IS ME
(406) wrote:
We think that its maybe the picture matched up with the piece that makes us think. You're very good at finding the right picture for your work. Not to take anything away from your talent, its just the two together that makes us think. We enjoyed.
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On Friday, May 18, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you I Is Me for your insight and kind words . They are always appreciated .
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2018, Purposelessness
(150) wrote:
I enjoyed this, such freedom in loneliness that can sometimes feel good - but usually not. I would also love to hear the song version of this!
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Purposelessness for reading and commentire .
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On Monday, May 14, 2018, Drea
(1443) wrote:
I really want to hear this with an acoustic guitar behind it. The way you were able to paint the images and bring the emotions to life... This one is special.
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On Monday, May 14, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you so much Drea . It seems many think this should be put to music . Maybe "Weird Al" Yankovic could cover it .
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On Monday, May 14, 2018, Arwen
(187) wrote:
There is such a freedom to being all alone I guess. I eat my words. You've had much more experience than I when it comes to isolation. Well written.
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On Monday, May 14, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Usually freedman has it's own form of isolation . Thank you Wednesday Addams for reading .