Echoes
By midnights voice
the echoes bounce
inside my head
telling me
"Not yet dead !"
I proclaimed
a mortal feast
then I slaughtered
and devoured the beast
And all the while
the echoes toiled
there inside
the sins , they boiled
I can always run
but never flee
the incessant pain
residing in me
in the valley
steeped and walled
my screams bounce back
as I've been called
inside my skull
a pathetic wreck
The echoes made
they bend , they beck
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Copyright 2017 midnights voice
Published on Thursday, December 28, 2017.
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Comments on "Echoes"
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On Saturday, December 30, 2017, Jerry stiles
(251) wrote:
Great write m.v....your "not dead yet"...keep the writes comming,,
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On Saturday, December 30, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Jerry for reading .
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On Friday, December 29, 2017, Arwen
(187) wrote:
Yup this is how I feel.
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On Friday, December 29, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Ha ha , it must be contagious . Thank you Wednesday for reading .
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On Thursday, December 28, 2017, sheff
(115) wrote:
The end was magic. The tormented tones were well done
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On Thursday, December 28, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Sheff so much for reading .
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A former member wrote:
I can relate to this - brilliant words
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On Thursday, December 28, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you _tonnyear for reading . I'm glad the words resonate .
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On Thursday, December 28, 2017, Cassette
(1144) wrote:
I love that final line.
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On Thursday, December 28, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Cassette for reading .