Case And Point

By GreekPhilosopher

In a pure room whitest of them all
Soul washing hands ready for a fall
Grace and beauty bid farewell
And all things no longer do dwell

Emptiness fulfilling every desire
And fading grim black will expire
All things surely and gradually grow
Warning signs begin their ominous glow

Set aside feeble longing of the unattainable
Measured goals must remain sustainable
Harsh radiance escapes impenetrable walls
And heat induced insomnia crawls

Stars are being searched for belief
As the room absorbs every grief
Greatness attends the supreme conscription
And the feeling is beyond all description

Sit and observe your place
And revel in the grace
Let it fall upon your face

Case
And
Point

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Published on Saturday, September 27, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

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On Sunday, July 25, 2004, sixsixnine (477) wrote:

again brilliantly a wicked piece! awesome work! *669*
A former member wrote: This is the first I've read of yours and I enjoyed it very much. I really like you name. That's what caught my eye *Greek Philosopher* =-MO-=
On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, asailorsangel (34) wrote:

As stated before many ways in which the mind can translate, I see it as standing at the doorway of change. ASA~
On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1246) wrote:

Your a damn good poet Greek.. damn good..
On Sunday, October 5, 2003, cre (411) wrote:

I just love the rhyme and rhythm of this ... I will have to read it over and over so as to hope it sinks in . . excellent write.
On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

ok cant comment I am going to dp mail you on this one... ¦Ñªê
On Monday, September 29, 2003, Loneal (86) wrote:

... I love how your words are very reader-friendly, open to interpretation ... I took Delphoid-Q's suggestion and re-read your work ... and a different meaning came to my mind each time ... great work! ~L
On Saturday, September 27, 2003, Delphoid-Q (213) wrote:

I think the profoundness of this piece will escape most who read it simply because the meaning is so deep. If anyone reads this comment my advice is to reread this piece a few more times. I guarantee you’ll find something new every time. Case and point!
On Saturday, September 27, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (467) wrote:

flows...nice write
A former member wrote: interesting...I like the line "And heat induced insomnia crawls"
On Saturday, September 27, 2003, hate_doll (265) wrote:

mm...I like your use of rhyme...never ceases to captivate and amuse me...very nice
A former member wrote: You were afraid to post this? it's wonderful, very profound. Great work.
On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, Lydia Jade (1350) wrote:

i love this, and im really into the ryhmingthing beacuse it seems to me that ryhming may be a litle harderto do then free form beacuse you gotta say what you feel but make the words ryhme! but that just might be me! ~Blood~

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