Painting you my poem ***************************
By MR feathered fox
Rain Crackled like fire
Outside my door step Last night
As if Hell's Angels cried
Sapphire tears
From their sad-firey eyes .....
Last night we painted our sins
With slow brush's Of skin
The start of art to cum
Before the night would end
For I had Dabbled in the
holy Waters of your euphoria,
Dunked in the the vibrant colors
of our combining aura's
painting our sweat & moans
With slow gentle strokes,
Lost in the depths of our art
As I painted you, my poem....
Now Wet & dripping you lay asleep
On our queen size canvas
Tucked away beneath the sheets
Like A wet dream Left to dry
For in the morning
I shall mount you to my wall..
To be adorn by naked eyes.......
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dedicated to Ashton mosby
Comments on "Painting you my poem ***************************"
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On Friday, February 24, 2017, cogitative
(88) wrote:
something about rainfall.. that was the prelude oh what I'd give just to teach them a lesson about the nether
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On Thursday, February 16, 2017, out there
(166) wrote:
'rain crackled like fire' -what a brilliant opening line. Again, some very original and creative wording /phrasing.. much enjoyed.
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A former member wrote:
He does it again the arrangement of your words I heard rain falling the whole time I was reading this well done Mr. Fox
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On Thursday, February 16, 2017, HereComesThePain
(14) wrote:
I dont know what your stats are but they're probably under rated! Masterful