Haiku (Non-traditional)

By CoffeeBreak

Wanted: A new heart,
Must be whole, warm and, loving,
Free of all defects.

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Copyright 2016 CoffeeBreak
Published on Thursday, April 7, 2016.     Filed under: "Haiku" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

A little morning haiku.
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  • Nimue44 On Tuesday, June 14, 2016, Nimue44 (311)By person wrote:

    I like little works like this that tell a story- and haikus are perfect for that.

  • RoseTheBrokenHearted On Thursday, April 21, 2016, RoseTheBrokenHearted (124)By person wrote:

    I love this so much, definitely worth reading again!

  • hazydaisy On Thursday, April 21, 2016, hazydaisy (139)By person wrote:

    oooooooh girl

  • CoffeeBreak On Thursday, April 21, 2016, CoffeeBreak (24)By person wrote:

    But I'm, in fact, male. :|

  • hazydaisy On Monday, May 16, 2016, hazydaisy (139)By person wrote:

    ooooooooh my dude

  • A former member wrote: I think this piece should put a quick smile on the face of anyone who reads these three lines. It did for me! Great write

  • soul_versing On Wednesday, April 6, 2016, soul_versing (959)By person wrote:

    I have nothing but LOVE for this haiku with its careful constructive use of words. ...bravo! Thanks for the smile. -Write on Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Couldn't agree more! Well penned! Scholar

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