Wake up while you are awake

By cadymae

some sounds crack your soul open

a turn of phrase
an odd lilt in a voice
a fork-producing offer
a beat placed just so
a tenderness in a name called
a hoot-cry above your doorframe


and in that second before

         your soul      knows      itself again

you could accomplish so much

if only you were home


to straighten the shelves of your character
to put away cracked regrets
to putty fine crazes in your memories
to toss a tablecloth to hide pride


But alas,

yet another chance has slipped away

while you paused

and half-smiled
at your mind's eye's showing for the day.

 

Next show will be at dawn

brought on by a whiff of lilacs

on the morning breeze.

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Copyright 2016 cadymae
Published on Friday, March 25, 2016.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, December 8, 2023, carlosjackal (3014)By person wrote:

    I can’t believe I missed this absolute pearl of a piece. So many brilliant components that are stunning individually and together work magic.

  • soul_versing On Thursday, April 7, 2016, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    My heart sank, and then arose throughout each transitional phase. You render me speechless and fumbling for all the right words to comment. You've taken me to a different world, cadymae, and I'm overjoyed. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: The first element of this work that leaps out at the reader is the originality of how the theme is addressed. It was a gripping experience to read and each line prompted our (at least my) empathy. A really fine work. Scholar

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, March 23, 2016, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    "But alas, yet another chance has slipped away while you paused and half-smiled at your mind's eye's showing for the day." - fantastic! Everyday is a new chance...and most days it is indeed wasted. Great piece! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Void Vortex On Wednesday, March 23, 2016, Void Vortex (303)By person wrote:

    Amazing. Like the piece was talking to my soul. Wonderful piece, cadymae. your words live. :)

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