on a warm Saturday.

By sheff


funny how 
a towering man 
crumbles in
as a tiny love
passes with so much.

funny how
a beautiful girl
is never
the violent one.



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Copyright 2015 sheff
Published on Tuesday, September 1, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Monday, December 23, 2019, carlosjackal (2615)By person wrote:

    Utterly powerful with so few words. Totally breathtaking and heartbreaking all at once.

  • Cassette On Tuesday, November 14, 2017, Cassette (1152)By person wrote:

    this... I'm speechless.

  • sIo On Thursday, December 29, 2016, sIo (927)By person wrote:

    Mysteriously deep and powerful. Makes me think.

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, September 8, 2015, FadedBlues (2180)By person wrote:

    giant killer poetry. great work...

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Friday, September 4, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1715)By person wrote:

    Love the little glimpses of imagery you rain out from your mind. Enjoyable piece! Ciao, T/S Scholar

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