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. fluidity and fail-safes .
By NikesRain
underwater dreams
of drowning clouds
breathing rain like solace
cradled in silence
to be so graceful
pulls me deeper
into these aching hours
oblivion save my wishes
in azure moon pulled softness
keep them washed safe
for one more possible breakdown
to be embraced gentle
lulls my trembling
in delicate viscous blue
ophelia whispers with aqueous sighs
the secret of crystalline sorrow
washed diaphanous in slow ripples
while holding on to waves of dreaming
to be so elegant
a heart floating with hope
even when the body lies still
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Copyright 2014 NikesRain
Published on Thursday, August 20, 2015.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on " . fluidity and fail-safes ."
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On Friday, January 8, 2016, urbanhumility
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wrote:
Beautiful...fluid....mythic....well spoken...well said...🌹
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A former member wrote:
Great work!
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On Wednesday, August 5, 2015, indefined
(23) wrote:
hamlet exhaled her filament thighs, epiphoric slices of the marrow ... you make my ink itch Doe, much love xx
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On Wednesday, January 21, 2015, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
Omgoodness, you always STEAL my breath away! xoxo!
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On Wednesday, December 17, 2014, heinzlet
(26) wrote:
Stunning imagery, hopefully I'll improve mine as well because I just feel like my poetry is so weak compared to yours. Beautiful poem, merci.
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On Wednesday, December 17, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Beautiful, I could picture Ophelia sinking beneath the surface as I read it. Wonderful imagery...I hope you keep kicking toward the shore, my friend. :) Ciao, T/S
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