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Revolution
By GreekPhilosopher
Take the passion
And distil it pure
And give it to those
As a cure
Compel the weak
To cause a riot
Against hostility
Never be quite
Whatever you do
Cleanse all the doubt
In all the world
Last the final bout
Join the cause
Present the solution
Cause a problem
Join the revolution.
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Copyright 2003 GreekPhilosopher
Published on Thursday, September 4, 2003.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Revolution"
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A former member wrote:
!! simply 100% real
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On Sunday, July 25, 2004, sixsixnine
(477)
wrote:
fuck yeah! short but seriously kickn some fucking ass! damn uumm good! *669*
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On Saturday, December 27, 2003, Mr King
(547) wrote:
poignant... powerfully simple... i feel the need to revolt!
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On Sunday, October 5, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
Nice write...actually made me laugh a little+Fallen One+
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On Thursday, September 18, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Ohh yes. I have for a long time dwelled in this(Went in deep). The ironi of it is that this poem sums it up. No matter what we want of it. This desribes it. It is simply a game. Even if we try to control it and keep it, real. It will end up in this poem.
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On Thursday, September 18, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Join The Revolution!(Not you greek hehe) Tiger
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On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
awesome write. i can't wait for more to come like this, i loved it plain and simple, good work *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Monday, September 8, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
well done sleek, it flows without flaw, its message divine.........urban
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On Sunday, September 7, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
*Sings a heroic song whilst waving the Greek flag.* I'm with you all the way Chris: let's go to Zim and revolt against Mugabe ;)
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On Saturday, September 6, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
HELL YES... you tell em Greek.. damn nice write.. Im with ya.. Peter
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On Friday, September 5, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
i enjoyed this. :) revolution tastes sweet on the tongues of many... but often learning it isn't all fun and safety pins scares them off. it can be pain and bitterness as well. but adversity is the reason we revolt in the first place. nice write.
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A former member wrote:
Even if you can't "Present the solution" you can always be a part of the solution, as opposed to part of the problem. Great write. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
Pretty cool piece.
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Yes, I liked, quietly provoking, striking deep. ~ mw
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Kittichoo
(37) wrote:
*Grins*
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