Rippled Verses.
By soul_versing
It starts with
a wee bit splatter
of ink,
your lyrical verses flow
steady throughout
my beating heart.
.I pop my knuckles.
letting my vivid mind
take flight.
it's not what you read
that moves me
it's the decoded meaning
that enlightens
a melody
a sonnet
a simple verse
.born from
a troubled imagination.
a slippery slope
where gibberish
latches to something solid
a conjurer of
creativity
a page filled.
the actions
so soothing.
I grip tight to
the imagery
dancing,
dancing thoughout
my fingertips.
I find safety
within this realm
unspoken words
shatter beneath
my porcelain skin
these are the verses
I let die
these are the unseen
verses keeping
my mind alive.
I end this with,
you're the balance
pulsating movement
within my pen.
My mind,
silences the whispers.
and I fill, yet another, page.
Awards
Comments on "Rippled Verses. "
-
On Sunday, February 12, 2017, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
Love the poetic sway of this. I enjoyed every moment.
-
On Thursday, May 11, 2017, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you bunches💋
-
On Tuesday, January 31, 2017, Purposelessness
(150) wrote:
This is my first day here and I'm feeling this, the inspiration and solace. I love the way you ended it.
-
On Thursday, May 11, 2017, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you much💋
-
On Sunday, January 29, 2017, Anna McCarra
(382) wrote:
When overtaken by inspiration, it truly is a ripple. It comes from the heavens through the heart, it seems, (shaking loose those whispers on the way) through to the finger tips as the ink flows. The act of writing is one of both longing and fulfillment. The words you grab later jump off the page and grab the reader...the ripple continues.
-
On Thursday, May 11, 2017, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thanks doll face💋
-
On Monday, January 23, 2017, SolApathy
(665) wrote:
What an amazing poem, If only the whispers weren't so loud!
-
On Monday, January 23, 2017, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you much appreciated.
-
On Thursday, October 13, 2016, 10 Forty Three
(593) wrote:
So beautiful and inspiring. This is why I love poetry. Both reading and writing. Excellent write! - 10:43
-
On Thursday, October 13, 2016, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you so much, loveâ¤
-
A former member wrote:
"where gibberish
latches to something solid"
My fave line! this poem inspires curious imagery in my mind... great job!!
-
On Thursday, April 7, 2016, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
I truly appreciate your comment, thank you for the compliment and smile.
-
A former member wrote:
Though I'm fairly new to the site, you've inspired me with the many pieces of your work that have stood out among the rest. Thank you for your brilliant work. Write on my friend, write on.
-
On Saturday, February 13, 2016, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you for the high-end compliment, I truly value it. :)
-
On Sunday, February 7, 2016, Dimensions
(95) wrote:
I love the way you describe your process. How it comes to you, and I guess we all have our own private process of this art that chose us, whether dancing into that flow of words, or plucking them from the sky as they pass like wind rushed clouds. Very revealing.
-
On Saturday, February 13, 2016, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you, I sincerely appreciate your comment.
-
On Friday, January 8, 2016, beamish
(137) wrote:
fantastic kinda sums it all up
-
On Friday, January 8, 2016, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you, I appreciate my comment(s).
-
On Sunday, January 3, 2016, Lab Rat
(131) wrote:
Inspiration seizes. This was captivating
-
On Sunday, January 3, 2016, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you.
-
A former member wrote:
Okay you truly are an very creative and talented writer you written a lot of great things I am hoping I can be good as you one day I am still an freelance writer and my work is pretty good hope to read more of your stuff
-
On Wednesday, December 30, 2015, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you for the high compliment, I truly appreciate it. -Write on
-
On Wednesday, November 4, 2015, carlosjackal
(3010) wrote:
Great flow and wonderful word smithery at play here. *raises a glass*
-
On Wednesday, November 4, 2015, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you Carlosjackal and cheers!
-
On Friday, February 27, 2015, Void Vortex
(303) wrote:
Inspired indeed. Thoughts into words, into poetry. Simply sublime. This piece has a deep familiarity to it. Thanks lots for sharing TG :]
-
On Monday, May 18, 2015, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you much, Void. I have always enjoyed reading your comments.
-
A former member wrote:
I enjoyed this. Flowed well. I would be more witty with a response but I'm barely awake.
-
On Monday, May 18, 2015, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you for taking the time to comment. :)
-
A former member wrote:
You keep blowing me away with your stunning use of words and strong display of imagery. Congratulations on poem of the day!
-
On Monday, May 18, 2015, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you so much for your comments and bookmarks♥
-
On Saturday, November 29, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Congrats on POTD, very well deserved! Ciao, T/S
-
On Saturday, November 29, 2014, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Wow... I'm quite speechless. I honestly didn't expect PoTD for this one. Thank you very much Steve♥ ...and I thank the person who nominated this work. .hugs.
-
A former member wrote:
I like this point of view. for me it seems to be a graveyard, where troubles reanimate to be buried on repeat.
-
On Monday, November 17, 2014, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Then metaphorically I'm the graveyard living in the shadows of those who inspire me. Sorry if this feels sarcastic. ...to each their own. Thank you♥
-
On Friday, November 14, 2014, Damon Tarloth
(143) wrote:
This ... "it's the decoded meaning that enlightens" sparked me to write something in a totally different style than I have ever written in.... Some of the lines I write are my favorite, but they don't make it into the poem as they don't fit, but they need to fit somewhere. I just don't know where atm...This one has put me into a creative mood... thank you for that :) Well done...
-
On Sunday, November 16, 2014, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you, being an inspiration to someone is a powerful thing. -Write on
-
On Tuesday, November 11, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Excellent piece! The imagery is fantastic, and I see you continue to develop and hone your craft. Awesome! Ciao, T/S
-
On Tuesday, November 11, 2014, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Thank you very much Steve♥ you are the very reason I continue to write. -bows
-
A former member wrote:
Words wrapped together in neat red twine, a present to the world at times. Theres a wonderful air to this poem, loveley write.
-
On Wednesday, November 5, 2014, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Awww, Cam. .squeezes.