Part II: Perfection

By SickSanityJenn

Sometimes to find Perfection
We must destroy and rebuild
Those broken, hollow creations
Just begging to be fixed and filled......






Bath of bleach to make you a queen
Blood purged for that pale skin glow
Contacts to make those eyes gleam
A little gloss and some eye shadow

First your pink and lacy underwear
Then the black dress to show curves
Brushed and curled your lovely hair
Wearing diamonds as you deserve

Finally my love, you have become
Everything I have ever desired
If only you hadn't made me succumb
To my anger that made you expire

I did my best to love you, my dear
Gave you everything without haste
I know the chain gave you such fear
But it was just so you didn't escape

Now you are another perfect little doll
Beautiful and still just like the rest
I had hoped to keep alive, each and all
But unfortunately nobody passed my test

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Copyright 2014 SickSanityJenn
Published on Sunday, August 10, 2014.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"
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  • The Talking Wolf-Cat On Saturday, October 4, 2014, The Talking Wolf-Cat (17)By person wrote:

    This feels like an extreme version of "A Little Piece of Heaven" by Avenged Sevenfold. I like both. I felt like I was an unseen observer to the inner workings of a man so obsessive he just snapped. I think you did an excellent job at portraying the mind of a man who does this, but doesn't realize he's wrong.

  • SickSanityJenn On Thursday, October 9, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much :) he has been an interesting mind to delve into, although I've become sidelined by a few other killers with their own endearing characteristics, I think he is more creative

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