Alcohol
By megaprime81
Sometimes honest, sometimes dumb
Alcohol, it makes me numb
Thinking backward, moving back
Like a mental heart attack
I'm tired of it,
Yet still I drink
Thought that it would
Help me think
Instead, it hinders
All I do
I'm not done yet
When will I be through?
Alcohol, alcohol
When will I be through
With you?
An addiction
Man it hurts
Can't quite think straight
Can't quite convert
Alcohol, alcohol
When will I be through
With you?
Hopefully soon....
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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Saturday, May 3, 2014.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
When will I have enough?Comments on "Alcohol"
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A former member wrote:
Your poem brought chills to me.
Although I cannot relate first hand; I have family that struggles with alcohol.
Hope you reached to gain control, and thank you for sharing this great piece!
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On Monday, May 5, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
it's a gnarly beast to tame. I wish you much success with it.. :)
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On Sunday, May 4, 2014, Commander_Cadaver
(245) wrote:
Were gonna die when the sun comes up We'll drink until we drop My blood is 100 proof We're gonna stumble twist and crawl 99 bottles of beer on the wall Id rather drink than fuck No doubt about it I cant live with out it No doubt about it I cant live with out it alcohol, alcohol
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On Sunday, May 4, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
I love your commentary! Yeah, I'm an alcohol head myself....great composition, once again. Much better than mine.
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On Sunday, May 4, 2014, Commander_Cadaver
(245) wrote:
That was from Gang Green's song "Alcohol". Good song.
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On Sunday, May 4, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Yeah, i've never heard of them. seem cool, though.