Scattershot

By megaprime81

Tomorrow I found 
Forever to yesterday
Bricks piled up
In my yard
Twisterella
Confuscius
Tormada
Tortada
Mix bag a nothin'
And a shallow divide

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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Saturday, May 3, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I composed this just after taking my meds...
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  • A former member wrote: I actually liked it a lot. It was short, and contained several seemingly random things, but then came the words "mix bag a nothing" and I just loved it.

  • megaprime81 On Saturday, May 3, 2014, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Thank you. I appreciate the feedback. :-)

  • blue angel On Saturday, May 3, 2014, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    I like this.. those first lines , took me awhile to get,, but yeah.. awesome write... it's deep..:)

  • megaprime81 On Saturday, May 3, 2014, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Thank you, angel...I was messed up from having taken my meds when i wrote it...


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