Scattershot
By megaprime81
Tomorrow I found
Forever to yesterday
Bricks piled up
In my yard
Twisterella
Confuscius
Tormada
Tortada
Mix bag a nothin'
And a shallow divide
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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Saturday, May 3, 2014.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
I composed this just after taking my meds...Comments on "Scattershot"
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A former member wrote:
I actually liked it a lot. It was short, and contained several seemingly random things, but then came the words "mix bag a nothing" and I just loved it.
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On Saturday, May 3, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you. I appreciate the feedback. :-)
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On Saturday, May 3, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
I like this.. those first lines , took me awhile to get,, but yeah.. awesome write... it's deep..:)
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On Saturday, May 3, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you, angel...I was messed up from having taken my meds when i wrote it...