what a downer

By mysticventures


There is no climb,

No path,

No way,

No destination,,

For life.


There is no glory,

No salvation,

No heaven,

No hell,

For the soul.


There is only the Now.

And our experience through it ...

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Copyright 2014 mysticventures
Published on Thursday, April 17, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • mysticventures On Thursday, April 17, 2014, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    thanks for the comments - yea the title is my way of being funny ;p

  • Cantara On Thursday, April 17, 2014, Cantara (819)By person wrote:

    Oh... I see but I had an after thought about the title. For me personally, when reading what you were saying kind of did bring me down but as in back down into my body and into the present moment. Don't know if that makes any sense to you? But it actually helped me a lot to 'come back down'.

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Thursday, April 17, 2014, Intoxicating Delirium (275)By person wrote:

    Its amazing how thought provoking you were able to make this with such few words. It reads wonderfully. Great write :)

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