Charmed by the Art

By megaprime81

I hear guitars playing
Loud and crashing drums
The music is hardcore
A nice metallic score
A rhythm undefiled
By censorship of style

The vocalist kicks in
With a vengeance of a roar
He expresses anger freely
Unlike I've heard before

Suddenly, it stops
End of song
I can't wait to hear more
Without it, time's a bore

The devil himself composed it

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Copyright 2013 megaprime81
Published on Tuesday, December 24, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • soul_versing On Friday, January 31, 2014, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    Yes, yes...I agree with blues about the title that did it for me as well. I love how you described your love of music. Perfection, I say. Bows- Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, December 29, 2013, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    ...drawn by the title. very descriptive of the fierce rhythm...

  • megaprime81 On Wednesday, January 8, 2014, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Thank you, i appreciate the kind words.

  • A former member wrote: very nicely crafted piece, the devil is in the details!

  • megaprime81 On Friday, December 27, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: Music is a great way to relate to something that holds very deep meaning, even if the meaning is only to the individual. A much enjoyed read, I love music.

  • megaprime81 On Wednesday, December 25, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    I think i composed this one while drunk...not sure. I might've been sober when i wrote it.

  • PentaGram On Tuesday, December 24, 2013, PentaGram (30)By person wrote:

    Some kind of metal music I like metal music and like your writing really much. Nice.

  • megaprime81 On Wednesday, December 25, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Thank you. The music is my life--C&C Music Factory.


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