2 Drunk

By megaprime81

when i was vomiting,
i could found  no peace
the woman that i know
could help me take its place

But i'm done

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Copyright 2013 megaprime81
Published on Sunday, December 22, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I wrote this while i was really drunk. Not sure exactly what i was trying to say, but i originally had several typos in this work that i corrected. It was a surprise to me that i'd written it.
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  • soul_versing On Friday, January 31, 2014, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    Got to love them drunken writes... I have a few posted here myself. Write on, drunken one! .giggles. Scholar

  • megaprime81 On Monday, December 23, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    I don't remember writing this...must've been drunker than i thought last night...

  • blue angel On Monday, December 23, 2013, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    awe, seems we try to fill the voids with the wrong sources at times. Seems a bit shifty still :)~

  • megaprime81 On Monday, December 23, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Before i corrected it, it was unintelligible at places; not one of my best, i admit. i'm not sure what i was trying to say, so i had to alter it somewhat to get it to make sense.


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