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Sinfonía de mi Vida
By SnowQueen
Vision blurred, in the silencing effect
Tears form paths of sorrow
Along my porcelain skin
Violins reflect each ache felt
Wind passing through my body...
Flowing... searching
Crimson clouds in my pale grey sky
Melody gently kisses the tenderness of my open lips
Hands reaching into the night sky
The hurt of abandonment
White fire on the sadness of desolation
Piano plays on...
A pure form...
Innocence seeping through the fingertips
A Spanish love
Pasión acústica
Heart racing....
Anticipation of ecstasy
Temptation pulls my breath deeper
Drums dance alongside my body
As my childhood eyes
Face bittersweet reality
I grow... woman.
In open view of my conductor
Hear the music being thread together
In the seconds...
Frozen moments captured.
A masterpiece of my life
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Copyright 2003 SnowQueen
Published on Wednesday, August 20, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Sinfonía de mi Vida"
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A former member wrote:
a splendid flow of aching words. giving the contrast of what music really can be for those... who for example sees the beauty a violin can give.
very lovely poem. // thanks.
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214)
wrote:
"Tears form paths of sorrow Along my porcelain skin" I really liked those lines, they drew me in
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On Thursday, January 8, 2004, Methos
(121) wrote:
this is the first work i've read of yours, it is truly amazing..your style, your thoughts..all create such vivid emotions -Great write! - Methos
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A former member wrote:
Very "womanly" poem - beautiful use of seemingly disjointed images and sensations. A more profound use of "Latin flavor" than I've usually seen. Lovely work.
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, DarkAyla
(52) wrote:
Wow, Very, Very nice...I really love everything about it, but the line "Crimson clouds in my pale grey sky" So nice...very good!
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
*Standing ovation* I think this is your best work yet. I would love to know more about what motivated such beautiful words. The aspects of nature and music were woven together with grace and fluidity. This poem was "a masterpiece of your life".
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A former member wrote:
This was lovely. Beautiful words wound around music...music, this was great.
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, angelunderneath
(60) wrote:
Here you made the pain of personal growth look so beautiful. I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
A little spanish i find "personally" sexy...and i wish i could speak it fluently...I also liked walking in aged wisdom and experience...very sweet
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
awesome piece, i especially like how you introduced instruments into this, very nicely written *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, eternal despair
(66) wrote:
very deep, and i can relate to it in a way... well written. thanx for the great read. .::Chérie::.
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