dreaming of the ocean
By BetaWolfinVA
Wave
Dancer
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Finding the wind
Is where i'd rather be
dancing on the waves
oh so far from here
.
making the moonlight home
on some darkling sea
as i let the wind
find a home in me
.
hear the skirling of the wind
in the open sails
feel the wood cutting through the waves
find your own way home...
.
.
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for i have found mine.
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.
.
...maybe some day
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Copyright 2013 HHMCameron
Published on Tuesday, August 27, 2013.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
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On Thursday, August 29, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
I agree the majority of us would rather be afloat upon a roaming sea... if so i would stay there indeffinately...
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On Friday, August 30, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
would definately love to be on the sea...
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A former member wrote:
Most of us would rather be there. I liked it
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On Friday, August 30, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
definately
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On Tuesday, August 27, 2013, the Id
(31) wrote:
This certainly felt as a lucid dream. Calm in spite of vivid intensities. This reminded me of staring deeping into a painting until you slip into it. Of course, I have an affinity for ships and oceans.
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On Friday, August 30, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
as i woke up that night, i had an image of looking down the starboard (right) side of a white cutter, near the bow... odd that i had never been aboard one...
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A former member wrote:
The sea and the moonlight was just beautiful. I loved it.
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On Tuesday, August 27, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
Glad that you liked it :)
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A former member wrote:
I like some of the images in the poem and I liked this part
making the moonlight home
on some darkling sea
as i let the wind
find a home in me
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On Tuesday, August 27, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
All my best poems are dreams spiked with insomnia... "wind dancer" is similar