i wanna Love you ...

By Devilish

faithful...

"i promise to
be better"

empty shadows
like

a silhouette

trace these lines
in the dark
with x.ray vision

then sell your
dreams to the
mask of collision

it's not in you

war is for
the

suicidal peace makers

year of the dog
toothless

sanctified free basers

i wanna love you
like it's the end
of the world

but you dress
in table top blues

so inviting

i'm accident prone
yet

the queen won't
dine alone
your heinous
there's

plenty of fools
to go around

hunger has horns
dark darling

they're the ones
whose starving

so
feed them first
divide their worth

i know
its the growth

in attendance
thats alarming


your turn to take
role call

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Copyright 2013 Devilish
Published on Saturday, August 17, 2013.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: in ever know what to say about your poetry, but i love it...10 from me x

  • A former member wrote: "i wanna love you like it's the end of the world" This part grabbed me up fast... You are an amazing poet dear :) It's always an honor to get to read your work.

  • A former member wrote: VERY nice.. 10

  • A former member wrote: This work knocks me back like taking two to the chest, subtle from the title. Intense in every verse. truth in the darkness, hope in the light.

  • BlackVelvet Rose On Thursday, August 29, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose (175)By person wrote:

    i'm speechless.... i really don't know what to say to comment on this.... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I can feel your intensity through your dark verses, but there are fragments of light in the shadows of your poetic voice. I am truly inspired! Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Monday, August 19, 2013, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    You never cease to amaze me with the impact you make. I love the last 6 lines. Too cool Dev, as always. Swee. Til next time -

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Sunday, August 18, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (332)By person wrote:

    "trace these lines in the dark with x.ray vision then sell your dreams to the mask of collision " I fucking love you...and this. Your flow lately has been getting ridiculous. Idk what youre doing but its working baby. xoxo

  • A former member wrote: I like, this kind of gives me a childhood memory or a flashblack

  • dwells On Sunday, August 18, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    When the roll is called up yonder, or maybe down under! Marvelous piece Dev and now going back for another bite, cheers!

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, August 18, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...well f*ck us all Dev, how amazing are you! every dude & babe who reads this is gonna take the title personally, it's a long line of fools. the world may end in table top blues...

  • A former member wrote: Some people will fall for anything, others see the danger that's right in front of them and know better than to indulge in that sweet allure. I find myself without anymore of your fantastic work, all I can do now is wait, hungry for your next piece. Until next time Dev.

  • A former member wrote: impeccable flow...storms the senses... almost a begrudging love... and at the same time a plea, an invitation, a request to stay and sicken and dine the feast of mad queens and kings. i love your complexities and a paradoxes both. you are a ravaging beauty. i'm swept away.

  • Nehema On Saturday, August 17, 2013, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Wow, "then sell your dreams to the mask of collision" I'm impressed, damn - XXOO Scholar

  • A former member wrote: This was written perfectly. I love the slight chill I got. Scholar

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, August 17, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Had to come back & read again. This time i'll be sure to leave your 10.

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, August 17, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    *Starts calling out names* Johnny? Susie?! Check check! Fuck...I wanna love you too ;) Nicely penned, you lil devil you!

  • Void Vortex On Saturday, August 17, 2013, Void Vortex (298)By person wrote:

    Evil style of writing. Vicious poem.

  • blue angel On Saturday, August 17, 2013, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    hunger has horns dark darling Hell yes... this write is stellar:)~ Dark and delicious ~^_^~


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