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i wanna Love you ...
By Devilish
faithful...
"i promise to
be better"
empty shadows
like
a silhouette
trace these lines
in the dark
with x.ray vision
then sell your
dreams to the
mask of collision
it's not in you
war is for
the
suicidal peace makers
year of the dog
toothless
sanctified free basers
i wanna love you
like it's the end
of the world
but you dress
in table top blues
so inviting
i'm accident prone
yet
the queen won't
dine alone
your heinous
there's
plenty of fools
to go around
hunger has horns
dark darling
they're the ones
whose starving
so
feed them first
divide their worth
i know
its the growth
in attendance
thats alarming
your turn to take
role call
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Comments on "i wanna Love you ..."
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A former member wrote:
in ever know what to say about your poetry, but i love it...10 from me x
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A former member wrote:
"i wanna love you
like it's the end
of the world"
This part grabbed me up fast... You are an amazing poet dear :) It's always an honor to get to read your work.
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A former member wrote:
VERY nice..
10
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A former member wrote:
This work knocks me back like taking two to the chest, subtle from the title. Intense in every verse. truth in the darkness, hope in the light.
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On Thursday, August 29, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175)
wrote:
i'm speechless.... i really don't know what to say to comment on this....
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A former member wrote:
I can feel your intensity through your dark verses, but there are fragments of light in the shadows of your poetic voice. I am truly inspired!
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On Monday, August 19, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(612) wrote:
You never cease to amaze me with the impact you make. I love the last 6 lines. Too cool Dev, as always. Swee. Til next time -
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On Sunday, August 18, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
"trace these lines in the dark with x.ray vision then sell your dreams to the mask of collision " I fucking love you...and this. Your flow lately has been getting ridiculous. Idk what youre doing but its working baby. xoxo
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A former member wrote:
I like, this kind of gives me a childhood memory or a flashblack
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On Sunday, August 18, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
When the roll is called up yonder, or maybe down under! Marvelous piece Dev and now going back for another bite, cheers!
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On Sunday, August 18, 2013, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...well f*ck us all Dev, how amazing are you! every dude & babe who reads this is gonna take the title personally, it's a long line of fools. the world may end in table top blues...
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A former member wrote:
Some people will fall for anything, others see the danger that's right in front of them and know better than to indulge in that sweet allure. I find myself without anymore of your fantastic work, all I can do now is wait, hungry for your next piece. Until next time Dev.
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A former member wrote:
impeccable flow...storms the senses... almost a begrudging love... and at the same time a plea, an invitation, a request to stay and sicken and dine the feast of mad queens and kings. i love your complexities and a paradoxes both. you are a ravaging beauty. i'm swept away.
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On Saturday, August 17, 2013, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Wow, "then sell your dreams to the mask of collision" I'm impressed, damn - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
This was written perfectly. I love the slight chill I got.
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On Saturday, August 17, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Had to come back & read again. This time i'll be sure to leave your 10.
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On Saturday, August 17, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
*Starts calling out names* Johnny? Susie?! Check check! Fuck...I wanna love you too ;) Nicely penned, you lil devil you!
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On Saturday, August 17, 2013, Void Vortex
(303) wrote:
Evil style of writing. Vicious poem.
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On Saturday, August 17, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
hunger has horns dark darling Hell yes... this write is stellar:)~ Dark and delicious ~^_^~
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