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Drunk Lips Don't Fib
By Clydes_Bonnie
and you're in trouble, Mr. Opaque
I knew better than to stay
but goddamnit
how I love it when you say
more than you intended
I am simply just a
homeless detective
a left turn life lesson
a subsitute infection
for those sorrows
at the bottom of your
captin morgans
Tell 'em not to love you
and they'll just love you more
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Copyright 2013 Clydes_Bonnie
Published on Saturday, August 17, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Drunk Lips Don't Fib"
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On Sunday, January 27, 2019, carlosjackal
(3016)
wrote:
Bar crawl savvy write that shines in its truth whilst rocking those bottles to their drunk doom. Excellent piece.
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On Sunday, September 1, 2013, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Truth serum, works every time, cheers! Oh, but wine can make one maudlin too.
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On Saturday, August 17, 2013, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
...where did you come from with those last 2 lines! I'd swear I've seen them in every broken heart poem ever w/o them actually being there. someone else already said 'killer.' she's freakin right...
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On Saturday, August 17, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
I've always been told that the only people who ever tell the truth are drunk people and children... and even children are starting to lie lol . This was good stuff xoxo
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On Saturday, August 17, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
So true:) Nice write, thanks for sharing!
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On Saturday, August 17, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
They do! Omg do they ever! Drunks do tend to become honest & unfiltered. I wish they didn't love more. Nice lil write :)
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A former member wrote:
this hit me like a ton of bricks. sick flow. killer pen. xo
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