Enema
By Deathkitten
Are you still hunting
for scanty crumbs?
Still hooked on greed
trying to kill me
but you won't
'cause you fear me
and the fight i'd give
even if I lost
I'd forever win
Haunting you
and more would come
after you
You're trapped
Still covered in dirt
trying to scrub off the hurt
as things become
ever so clear
Your face is numb
and so is mine
as we stand impatiently
scraping the line
before our crime
we meet on time
Aiding
Assisting
in an excremental
homicide
Delivering relief
just like an enema
Recording the action
for our at-home cinema
Need a little less distraction
I'm ready for the apocalypse
and the final retraction
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Wednesday, June 5, 2013.
Filed under:
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Author's Note:
Hah pieces of shit I tell ya!Comments on "Enema"
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A former member wrote:
Cowards, cowards everywhere. People are bravest where their words cannot be heard. Ah it's just been a little over a week, but oh how I missed reading your work. Such a fluid piece, absolutely seamless.
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On Thursday, June 6, 2013, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Sheesh! You really shouldn't have used that grease gun! This piece was very impactful and released a flood of pent-up emotions. Did you ever hear the one about the pig with a cork in its behind and the mischievous monkey? Cheers Jess and I can't stop smiling!
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On Thursday, June 6, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
No, never heard of that one haha glad I could make you smile :)
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On Thursday, June 6, 2013, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
lol. fuck em and feed em fish,. let the dog out..
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On Thursday, June 6, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Raw fish? What kinda dog? hmm
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On Thursday, June 6, 2013, haunted
(849) wrote:
haha I love it. again you have thoroughly outdone yourself. you have lots of talent and I always smile when you post because I know im going to be in awe, like ok what is in her head today! lol....your the best jess, your really a great writer. awesome!
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On Thursday, June 6, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
I always smile when I get a comment from you, cause I know it's going to be positive & you actually take time & mean it. Thanks, Todd!
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On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
This was awesome... "Delivering relief just like an enema Recording the action for our at-home cinema" that part was beyond perfect. I'm glad I decided to read some of your stuff, definitely a new favorite.
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On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Yay! Another fan that appreciates me. Thank you :)
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On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Dang girl... you can really rip em' out !! I love this one ~^_^~ apocalypse...Now, sweet...
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On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
I write like crazy (bam bam) like a neverending revolver. Things come to me easily most days & rarely spend more than 20mins writing a piece. My short stories take longer of course, but if I were to sit down & thoroughly think & pick my brain for longer, i'd come up with much better, too bad i'm so spontaneous! Maybe that's my downfall...anyhoo, thank you :)
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On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Spill it when you feel it... I too tap em' out quick. and thought the same thing, that maybe I should take a little more time on em' . but, I think they are what they are !! Go w/ the flow it works well for ya , I'm impressed that's for sure , xxx to ya ~^_^~
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On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Impressed from caress, when my hand slips up your sexy dress...to test the best and make a mess with my fingers and tongue, while I explore the rest and make you cum?
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On Thursday, June 6, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
ooh, yes...kinky, jus how I like it.. u jus turned me on. ~^_^~ xxx
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On Thursday, June 6, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Well now all ya gotta do is call me so we can have phone sex ;)
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On Thursday, June 6, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
sext me, anytime...xxx
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On Thursday, June 6, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
You got it! xxx