Marshmallow Soot

By lupus tenebrae


Though the campfire
stood in reverie, Luna
scattered its embers;

sad that her marshmallow grace
was a malleable soot.


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Copyright 2013 lupus tenebrae
Published on Monday, May 27, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Something I concocted after a picnic.
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  • Deathkitten On Monday, May 27, 2013, Deathkitten (581)By person wrote:

    Damnit! I hate when that happens. They're the best when they're mmmm browned, gooey & hot haha om nom nom!!!

  • A former member wrote: "Being an adult does not diminish the great disappointment in having a scoop of ice cream fall from the cone" This poem reminded me of that quote :)

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